Wendy I loved this! Can't believe I am the first soul in this comment section. The prose was so good. So many phrases I got jealous of. Zack's voice is so distict. I do love it when women write men so well as you do. The opening paragraphs were especially gripping. The only "complaint" I have is: when you mentioned "Zack's track" at the start and over the audio link - I was half hoping for an actual tune of his from his glory days hah.
Oh, tell me about it!! If only I could write music... I am desperately hoping someone with musical chops will read this story and write the music for me...
Thanks so much for your feedback. It's high praise from you, who writes men so well!
Thank you, I do like writing them for some reason 😊 And I do seek out writers who can convey their voices well. Funny enough, I am not sure men always convey male voices well hah. And yes - I so wish I could help anyhow with the musical arrangement for Zack's song - someone please do this!
Wendy I loved this! Can't believe I am the first soul in this comment section. The prose was so good. So many phrases I got jealous of. Zack's voice is so distict. I do love it when women write men so well as you do. The opening paragraphs were especially gripping. The only "complaint" I have is: when you mentioned "Zack's track" at the start and over the audio link - I was half hoping for an actual tune of his from his glory days hah.
Oh, tell me about it!! If only I could write music... I am desperately hoping someone with musical chops will read this story and write the music for me...
Thanks so much for your feedback. It's high praise from you, who writes men so well!
Thank you, I do like writing them for some reason 😊 And I do seek out writers who can convey their voices well. Funny enough, I am not sure men always convey male voices well hah. And yes - I so wish I could help anyhow with the musical arrangement for Zack's song - someone please do this!
I mean, I've written tons of lyrics... just need the music...