So interesting how my first read was me being exasperated that he expected V to answer on his timeline, when he’d had plenty of time to stew on it, but with the recording, my heard broke for the guy. The eeedjit,
She’s definitely not blameless either but I am hoping against hope she is brave enough to give him an answer (when she figures it out), even if he’s decided it for her. But maybe not this season?? 🥺
I really enjoyed reading this chapter. You’ve created a strong hook, and I’m genuinely curious to see where the story goes from here. I’m a beta reader, so I naturally pay attention to things like pacing, character development, and what keeps a reader turning the page. Keep going, you’ve got something interesting here.
Yes, I have just done a round of beta reads for my completed serial The Murder Coat and am currently editing that for self publishing, which is exciting and daunting in equal measures!
Only two chapters left? Now I’m definitely invested! I’ve really enjoyed what I’ve read so far, and I’d honestly love to read the complete story once you’ve finished the serial.
I’m the kind of reader who enjoys going through a manuscript with a close eye not just for typos, but for pacing, character development, continuity, and those little places where a scene could land even more strongly. So if you ever want another pair of eyes on the completed story, I’d be happy to read along and share my thoughts.
Feel free to let me know when you reach the end I’d love to keep up with it. My email is also listed on my profile if that’s easier for staying in touch.
For now, though, I’m looking forward to those final two chapters!
Oh for fuck’s sake, Zack … she can’t read your mind either, you blitherin’ idiot. Also, pretty sure my brain runs like Veronica’s, only it rarely hits paper unless I’m really really stuck and then I’m totally that conspiracy guy meme.
Wendy, aaaggggggghhhhhh! Seriously, I am now going to be on the edge of my seat for another week. Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. Now, about the delayed recording - I am disappointed BUT I am willing to wait for it since it means I get to experience this chapter one more time. And, for the record, when I read it to myself I heard yours and Armchair Dweller's voices. Yes, you've fully trained me. I hope you're happy. 💜
Iva and Michael H. What a combination! I definitely had him as British in my head. (Am I channeling my own fave 80s rockstar there…)
Yeah, D’s voice is perfect for him! We had so many rock stars to choose from!
So interesting how my first read was me being exasperated that he expected V to answer on his timeline, when he’d had plenty of time to stew on it, but with the recording, my heard broke for the guy. The eeedjit,
Yeah, there’s a lot going on. V is not blameless.. but its a case of two flawed adults with a ton of baggage… and not talking about it.
She’s definitely not blameless either but I am hoping against hope she is brave enough to give him an answer (when she figures it out), even if he’s decided it for her. But maybe not this season?? 🥺
Well, two chapters to go... you'll see!
Just listened to the recording … Oh fuck… Zack…. 😭😭😭😭
Right? I really had to keep myself in hand to not cry through it…
I really enjoyed reading this chapter. You’ve created a strong hook, and I’m genuinely curious to see where the story goes from here. I’m a beta reader, so I naturally pay attention to things like pacing, character development, and what keeps a reader turning the page. Keep going, you’ve got something interesting here.
Thank you so much for that feedback, I really appreciate it. And this is near the end of the serial, with just two more chapters to go!
Do you have someone giving you feedback on your books?
Yes, I have just done a round of beta reads for my completed serial The Murder Coat and am currently editing that for self publishing, which is exciting and daunting in equal measures!
Only two chapters left? Now I’m definitely invested! I’ve really enjoyed what I’ve read so far, and I’d honestly love to read the complete story once you’ve finished the serial.
I’m the kind of reader who enjoys going through a manuscript with a close eye not just for typos, but for pacing, character development, continuity, and those little places where a scene could land even more strongly. So if you ever want another pair of eyes on the completed story, I’d be happy to read along and share my thoughts.
Feel free to let me know when you reach the end I’d love to keep up with it. My email is also listed on my profile if that’s easier for staying in touch.
For now, though, I’m looking forward to those final two chapters!
Oh for fuck’s sake, Zack … she can’t read your mind either, you blitherin’ idiot. Also, pretty sure my brain runs like Veronica’s, only it rarely hits paper unless I’m really really stuck and then I’m totally that conspiracy guy meme.
I channelled you a wee bit here, Leanne!
Nooo Zack! Don't give up on her! She'll just go ahead and think key she doesn't deserve you or something!
Ugh. Hardest scene to write, dude, so rough. i was literally crying by the end of it...
Wendy, aaaggggggghhhhhh! Seriously, I am now going to be on the edge of my seat for another week. Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. Now, about the delayed recording - I am disappointed BUT I am willing to wait for it since it means I get to experience this chapter one more time. And, for the record, when I read it to myself I heard yours and Armchair Dweller's voices. Yes, you've fully trained me. I hope you're happy. 💜
Awww, Martin, that made me well up. Thank you!
AWESOME!!!!
Thanks Rowan!